The observatory was dark, giving way to a stunning array of constellations above. These quiet moments with Danny were Maeve’s favorite. Too often she found herself pushed to the side for women giggling like school girls.
She always tried to be nice but sometimes, like during their long awaited reunion dates, she found it hard to be accommodating.
“I love you.” Danny pulled her closer. “Hey, I wanna ask you something.”
“Of course.” Butterflies settled in her stomach. Was this it?
“I wanted to ask …”
A shrill scream cut through the dark.. “Oh my gaawwddd! It is you!”
Word Count: 99 (per the rules)
Phrase/Word/Idea: A Rock Star
A little late entry for the Carrot Ranch flash fiction challenge.
I think he needs to figure this out or she should move on.
Good perspective on the prompt.
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I would have to agree. Thank you for reading
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Talk about a cliffhanger ending. Nice one, you really sucked me in. I vote for more of this story. ~nan
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I’m glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading
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Oh, no! That would be so hard — the constant interruptions. Yours was well-timed to build the tension.
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Thank you Charli!
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